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Welcome to the 2nd Tuesday at the Christian Writer’s Den! Today we’re celebrating our friends’ successes, but first, let me tell you that I hate outlines!
I Hate Outlines!
I do. I hate them with a passion. The dislike (And yes, I would click the thumb down button here if there was one!) begins with the very premise of an outline.
You want me to put things in order? Line them up correctly? Stick to a pattern? FOLLOW THE RULES?
What about creativity? What about the muse?
Arrgghhhhh! (Did I tell you I donâ€™t like outlines?)
When I sat down to write my first novel, I tried to make an outline. I really did. After all, thatâ€™s what writers do, right? I gathered all my writerly stuff, including a dictionary, a thesaurus, and my college English textbook (this was before the development of online resources), put a sheet of paper into my electric typewriter, and pecked out a few words. Then I stared. A long time. Apparently it wasnâ€™t a good outline.
I ripped out that paper, threw it in the trash and tried again with a fresh, clean sheet. I wrote a few words . . . and stared. A long time. Ripped out the paper and started again. Over and over the process repeated. Paper. Trash. Paper. Trash.
Finally I admitted defeat. Outlining just didnâ€™t work for me. I must be a seat-of-the-pants writer, reasoned. I just needed freedom!
I rolled a new piece of paper into the typewriter and wrote a brilliant first lineâ€”14 times. Iâ€™d heard that getting published was really hard work, so I knew that first line had to be perfect. And after 14 tries, it was!
I hit the return, twice. (Remember this was before word processing.) After all, I had read an issue of Writerâ€™s Digest Magazine from cover to cover. I knew the manuscript was supposed to be double-spaced. I stared at the brilliant first line, and then down to the blank one. And stared. A long time.
Three days later, I had one just-about-as-perfect-as-you-can-get-it double-spaced page of setting, dialogue, and plot.
But hard as I tried, I couldnâ€™t move ahead. I had no idea what was happening nextâ€”and on top of that, it had to be perfect!
This was never going to work! Enter: the narrative outline. But not just any kind of narrative outlineâ€”the Vonda Skelton style of narrative outline.
I simply started writing plot points, stuff I knew about the characters, and what happened nextâ€”all single spaced with no dialogue, no setting, no paragraphs, no spell check, no grammar correction. On and on it went, page after page after page.Â I realized that for me, the key was to trick myself into thinking I wasnâ€™t writing a book at this point. I had to give myself permission to make it sloppy and ugly, and in order to do that, I had to single space, leave out dialogue, and forget any rules. Hereâ€™s a sample from the Bitsy and the Mystery at Hilton Head Island narrative outline:
Bitsy goes to Hilton Head Island w/her baseball team (sheâ€™s the only girl). Iâ€™m not sure why theyâ€™re going, maybe theyâ€™re in a baseball tournament. Iâ€™m not sure what kind of league theyâ€™re in, but it canâ€™t be an official league because the rules wonâ€™t work. Since sheâ€™s the only girl, she can only go because the coachâ€™s wife and daughter are going. But while theyâ€™re traveling something happensâ€”car trouble? Sickness? Lost? but the mom and daughter have to go back home and B has to stay with another team at their house since there wonâ€™t be a woman with her team. She begs coach to let her stay with them but he wonâ€™t. their team is poorâ€”no matching uniforms/in dilapidated van, but the team she has to stay with is rich. Her team is staying in an old dirty beach house but the team Bâ€™s with stays in a fancy house. Somewhere along the wayâ€”I donâ€™t know whatâ€™ll happen to make it happen, but sheâ€™s gonna start telling lies in order to try to fit in and act like sheâ€™s rich. The Paris Mountain lie. Daddy in oilebusiness. Sheâ€™s a good baseball player and they need her. There are 5 good players and 5 bad ones. The team has to be outside late at nightâ€”I donâ€™t know what theyâ€™ll do, but they have to be out late at night so they can find a dead loggerhead turtle. Maybe she blames Ian or maybe somebody else does, but somebody thinks he did it.
And on and on it goes to the end. Thatâ€™s my personal version of the Narrative Outline, and that outline has worked for me through all three of my published novels and my womenâ€™s non-fiction.
The key for is that I have to trick myself into seeing it as a long, fragmented note, NOT a book or an outline. Thatâ€™s the only way I can be creative and I can turn off the internal editor at the same time!
So, are you having trouble moving ahead with your outline or your first draft? Then maybe youâ€™ll want to consider a Skelton Narrative Outline for your book!
And the best part is, itâ€™s FREE!
Letâ€™s Celebrate Kudos With Our Christian Writerâ€™s Den Friends!
What a joy to see writers working hard and being successful. Hereâ€™s the good news for this month:
1.Â Marilyn Nutter (SC): My article, â€śRock Collecting,â€ť was published on A Widowâ€™s Might/A New Season on August 27, 2016.
2.Â Amanda Everett (VA): I was able to have a blog post, What I Wish I Knew in College published on The Rising!
3.Â Tracy Crump (MS): 1)Chicken Soup for the Soul chose two of my stories to publish in their Joy of Christmas book that comes out in October. 2)My story, â€śHoley Memories,â€ť was a finalist in Southern Writers Magazineâ€™s Short Story Contest and published in their Best Short Stories 2016 issue. 3)And I have a new writerâ€™s website! (No more pitiful homemade site.)
4.Â Sandy Kirby Quandt (TX): My entry, Not All Heroes Come Back, was awarded an Honorable Mention in the Childrenâ€™s/Young Adult Fiction category of the 85th Annual Writerâ€™s Digest Writing Competition. (Vonda here: For those who arenâ€™t familiar with Writerâ€™s Digest Competitions, they receive thousands of entries for every competition they hold. Honorable Mention is highly honorable!)
Arenâ€™t these inspiring reports? And I have a feeling that if you asked each of these writers how long it took to begin seeing results, theyâ€™ll tell you it was a long, hard journey that required lots of perseverance. So donâ€™t give up. Success or failure isnâ€™t measured by acceptances and rejections. I received 63 rejections before I ever had anything published! I often wonder how different my life would be if I had never submitted that 64th query.
As the late Gary Provost personally told me, â€śThe only way to fail is to not write.â€ť In other words,
The only way to fail is to quit.
Who MoGoâ€™d in August and Earned Another Chance for $100?
These writers wrote at least 7000 new words on a book project in August:
#17:Â Susan Baganz â€“ 33,356 words
#18:Â KathryneAnn â€“ 13,357 words
Congratulations, Susan and KathryneAnn! So proud of your hard work and many words! Iâ€™m looking forward to Na-No-Wri-Mo in November. Hope to see lots of CWD writers there!
Well, that does it for another 2nd Tuesday. Didnâ€™t see your name in the list of successes? Donâ€™t worry! Just be sure to return next week when Iâ€™ll be posting a list of writing opportunities, contests, and conferences just for you!
I pray Godâ€™s blessing on the work of your hands and your hearts,
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